Creative Writing Details

 I've been working on writing more detailed statements. I am playing on sharing my thought process with you guys. Starting with an introductory statement and adding more details is fine, but you can't remove any details from the statement. I added a little thing to it to challenge me. If I add details, I can't take them away from the final statement. 

Rewrite the statement and add details, but don't remove details.

Main Statement: Princess on the dance floor.

1^st Rewrite Statement: The princess is dancing on the dance floor.

2^nd Rewrite Statement: The Princess is dancing in a floor-length blood-red dress.

3^rd Rewrite Statement: The Princess dances in a blood-red dress around the main dance floor.

4^th Rewrite Statement: The Princess dances with the prince around the main dance floor, her blood-red dress swaying around.

5^th Rewrite Statement: The Princess is dancing around the main dance floor with the prince as her floor-length red dress swirls around her legs as he spends her around.

6^th Rewrite Statement: The Princess is dancing around the main dance floor with the prince as her floor-length red dress swirls around her legs as he spends her around.

7^th Rewrite Statement: The Princess is dancing around the main dance floor with her prince as her floor-length red dress swirls around her legs as he spins her around and around. The guards stood around the club, watching everything and everyone.

8^th Rewrite Statement: As the princess is dancing with the prince on the main dance floor, the guards guard around the club's outside edge. The prince spins her around, making her dress swirl around her legs.

9^th Rewrite Statement: As the princess is dancing with the prince on the main dance floor, the guards guard around the club's outside edge. The prince spins her around, making her dress swirl around her legs. Her head tilts back, and he dips her, making her hip-length blonde hair fall back. You can see the smile on her lips. 

Final Statement: The princess is dancing with the young prince on the main dance floor while the guards stand watching around the club's outside edge. The young prince spins her around, swirling her dress around her legs. He dips her, making her head tilt back and her hip-length hair fall back, almost touching the dance floor. You can see a smile on her lips as she laughs.