Creative Writing Details

 I've been working on writing more detailed statements. I am playing on sharing my thought process with you guys. Starting with an introductory statement and adding more details is fine, but you can't remove any details from the statement. I added a little thing to it to challenge me. If I add details, I can't take them away from the final statement. 

Rewrite the statement and add details, but don't remove details.

Main Statement: Princess on the dance floor.

1^st Rewrite Statement: The princess is dancing on the dance floor.

2^nd Rewrite Statement: The Princess is dancing in a floor-length blood-red dress.

3^rd Rewrite Statement: The Princess dances in a blood-red dress around the main dance floor.

4^th Rewrite Statement: The Princess dances with the prince around the main dance floor, her blood-red dress swaying around.

5^th Rewrite Statement: The Princess is dancing around the main dance floor with the prince as her floor-length red dress swirls around her legs as he spends her around.

6^th Rewrite Statement: The Princess is dancing around the main dance floor with the prince as her floor-length red dress swirls around her legs as he spends her around.

7^th Rewrite Statement: The Princess is dancing around the main dance floor with her prince as her floor-length red dress swirls around her legs as he spins her around and around. The guards stood around the club, watching everything and everyone.

8^th Rewrite Statement: As the princess is dancing with the prince on the main dance floor, the guards guard around the club's outside edge. The prince spins her around, making her dress swirl around her legs.

9^th Rewrite Statement: As the princess is dancing with the prince on the main dance floor, the guards guard around the club's outside edge. The prince spins her around, making her dress swirl around her legs. Her head tilts back, and he dips her, making her hip-length blonde hair fall back. You can see the smile on her lips. 

Final Statement: The princess is dancing with the young prince on the main dance floor while the guards stand watching around the club's outside edge. The young prince spins her around, swirling her dress around her legs. He dips her, making her head tilt back and her hip-length hair fall back, almost touching the dance floor. You can see a smile on her lips as she laughs. 

Shop Updates

So, it has crossed my mind that most people don't know that I have a little Etsy shop. I sell random things I make there. Right now, I am only selling a PDF of a Scene Card template that I made. The main reason I made it is because I like outlining my scenes with main points before I write them. This pdf that I made makes it easier for me to do that. I wanted to share it with the world because What might help me might help you. I understand that it might not help anyone, but there is a chance that it'll help someone if it makes it to them. I feel like I need to state this. I will make a little bit of money from each sale. As always, thank you so much for taking the time to read my blog; it means a lot to me. Have a beautiful and great day.

Scene Card PDF